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he runs
and throws.
the ball goes
right through the goal.
his team gathers around him
and cheers in success.
he looks to his left
and laughs at the sight of his coach being soaked
and from the right
appears his wife
days later the game high dies
and the only reminder of vitory
is the ring he wears
on his fourth right finger
and throws.
the ball goes
right through the goal.
his team gathers around him
and cheers in success.
he looks to his left
and laughs at the sight of his coach being soaked
and from the right
appears his wife
days later the game high dies
and the only reminder of vitory
is the ring he wears
on his fourth right finger
according to some humans this poem sucks... oh well. lemme know how you feel about it
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i believe that, i think that makes alot of sense. but we arent all losers when we die. in godno one is a loser. i take this poem as earthly glory is vain it never lasts but glory in heaven lasts an etrnity. a victory for heaven would be like treating your wife right or following gods example on how to live an honest life. thats more or less what i took from it.
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